Moreover is not a good way to begin a poem
though many start somewhere in the middle.
though many start somewhere in the middle.
Secondly should not be placed
at the opening of your second stanza.
at the opening of your second stanza.
Furthermore should be regarded
as a word to avoid.
as a word to avoid.
Aforementioned is rarely found
in poems at all, and for good reason.
in poems at all, and for good reason.
Most steer clear of notwithstanding,
and the same goes for
and the same goes for
nevertheless, however,
as a consequence, in any event,
as a consequence, in any event,
subsequently,
and as we have seen in the previous chapters.
and as we have seen in the previous chapters.
Finally's appearance at the top
of the final stanza is not going to help.
of the final stanza is not going to help.
All of which suggests (another no-no)
that poems don't need to tell us where we are
that poems don't need to tell us where we are
or what is soon to come.
For example, the white bowl of lemons
For example, the white bowl of lemons
on a table by a window
is fine all by itself
is fine all by itself
and, in conclusion, so are
seven elephants standing in the rain.
seven elephants standing in the rain.
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